zackfire17's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ape's Boogiedown]

:DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

About damn time, I loved it. Epic music choice, btw.
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It says my summary is too short...

PENIS
PENIS
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHG

[Neon Fight]

Dude

Stick with the style you had in ur other movie, and practice! This one kinda sucked... A lot.

Dasimonster responds:

Alrightey then

[The Last Fight]

great

The fight was done well, but it felt a bit short for an epic battle. Also the story felt a teeny bit rushed. Overall, pretty darn great.

i noticed you avoided drawing eyes the whole time :P

[(GN) You are an idiot]

This flash suck balls but..

...I know what you're saying. I see tons of spam flashes with flash lights and rotating images, and a quarter of them make it through the portal! Sometimes i'm just like, "That fucking passed!? I just saw a flash that way more effort was put into get blammed.". Goddamn the portal system is fucked right now. People can just tween a rotating object, add some flashing lights, and tell all their friends to vote five on it, and it'll pass. It's fucked up.

[The Brass Seal: Ep 1D]

great

but subtitles would be a nice option, cuz the sound effects are really loud and the ppl talk really quiet

[Piece by Piece.]

decent i guess

ok, decent idea and smooth animation, but i feel like you could have done a lot more with the skill u've got there

[MADNESS!?!?!]

not good

you just recycled a clip from one of your other movie and added 5 more crappy pictures

Little-Red-Bear responds:

ouch.

[Madness: the ninja killer]

that sucks you suck take advice or dont submit

(- 0.024) johnbish is saying he created a flash like this one his first try and you've had five flashes and more that were blammed and you still haven't improved
(maybe its because ur not taking help and advice hmmm?)

back to the review, ur character didnt move while they were fighting-
ok nvm im trying of trying to point out the things wrong with ur movie

continue to suck asshole

Little-Red-Bear responds:

well mabey you should give some advice

[Sticky 3]

ur character movment is smooth but

ur effects are sorely lacking, when you draw one energy trail and use a tween to make it stretch and fade it looks pretty terrible draw the fading of the effect in fbf, try not to use gradient they clash with the feel of the flash. when they were high in the clouds and the one shot the other with lightning, that was a good effect. also. ur nuclear explosion looked like an expanding mushroom growing behind the city while the city stayed intact
(me is too lazy for punctuation)
all of these things detract from the overall effect!